The Next Draft – Online Workshop

You are only 20 steps away from writing your very best draft ever, both in terms of story craft and script perfection.

Learn the Story Department method to rewriting your screenplay, without leaving the comfort of your writing desk.

This online course was developed for your specific needs and budget; you can select your preferred level of interactivity or pace.

>>> The workshop will be offered at this price once only. <<<

ALL PRICES ARE IN $USD.  AUSTRALIANS ADD 10% GST.

If you live outside Australia and you sign up for Twin Fun or higher, you receive a free upgrade to the next level (worth $50).  I.e.: you will get Max Impact, the top-level for $219. For only $169 you get the Tutor-Guided level.


YOUR TUTOR

Karel Segers

Karel Segers is a former international movie buyer who blogs, teaches and consults on screen story. Among his clients are writers, producers, the AWG and government agencies locally and overseas.

Karel headed Programming and Acquisitions at the Digital Broadcasting Company in London, bought films for Europe’s biggest pay-tv Canal Plus and was a movie show host for MTV Europe.

Karel has an outstanding success record both as a teacher and a story consultant. He ranks in the world’s Top 10 most influential people on Twitter for screenwriting and is recognised as an authority on the Hero’s Journey and story structure.

Bookings are now open!

Click below on the green button of your choice

SOLO LEARNER – WORK INDEPENDENTLY AND GET A TERRIFIC DEAL

For only $99 you can take the full 20-step course and complete it at your own leisure, over two months.

Included are checklists, script samples, tutorial videos and personal rewriting exercises.

We launch with a 1-hour online class explaining the course structure and answering any questions you might have.

At the end of the journey, you can download a copy of the ‘Next Draft Checklist’, a handy overview of all the techniques you have learned in the workshop.

This checklist will be your guide throughout the rewriting process and your measuring stick to keep you on target!



TWIN FUN – LEARN WITH A BUDDY AND HEAD FOR THE TARGET TOGETHER

If you like to be monitored, we match you up with a buddy who will work through the course with you. Your buddy will give you feedback and support and you will encourage each other to stay on track.

Your tutor will still keep an eye on your progress and give feedback on your logline, the most important tool in developing your concept and getting your screenplay read. Upon completion, you will receive personalized advice for the next draft during a half hour Q&A with your tutor.

Because no-one works at the same pace, you get an additional month access to the course materials, so you have ninety days to complete the work.

This approach is stimulating and fun and – who knows – you might end up with a writing partner!

If an odd number of screenwriters signs up for this option, the first one will have me (Karel) as their buddy. It means you get the Max treatment at a massive discount!



TUTOR TAUGHT – GET THE BEST GUIDE ON YOUR JOURNEY

For a more guided approach with a professional tutor, you choose this option.

In addition to all the goodies of both budget options, you  will receive expert feedback on your logline as well as your one-page synopsis.

You also receive up to one full hour of personalized online tutoring via phone or Skype. If you wish, you can break this up into two sessions: one at the end of the first Ten Steps (Story) and one just before commencing the rewrite.

Another benefit of this option: you have access to the online course materials for 4 months from signing up.

This approach makes sure you get the best professional advice for your own specific needs.



MAX IMPACT – IF YOU’RE SERIOUS ABOUT BUILDING A PRO WRITING CAREER

If your intention is to grow to a pro level as soon as possible, you want to choose this option. The learning curve will be steeper as your tutor guides you along the way, making sure you get every step of the process.

The outcome of each assignment will be checked by the tutor and you will receive feedback on everything within 48 hours.

This option gives you no less than 90 minutes one-on-one with your tutor in order to discuss aspects of the course or specific issues regarding your own story or screenplay.

You will have access to the course materials for one full year and in addition to the story feedback as part of the first part of the workshop, the Tutor will give you notes on a 5-page sample of your next draft.

COMPARE OPTIONS AND SELECT WHAT SUITS YOU BEST

Make your choice and book early. Only 20 students will be accepted into this course and it will never run in this format again. If you have any questions that are not answered on this site, contact me by email via the form at the bottom of this page.

I’m looking forward to seeing you in the virtual classroom!

If you sign up before the 4th of July, you will receive a free upgrade to the next level.

You will get “Max Impact”, the top level Tutor guided workshop for $219.

Or for only $99 you can join the buddy program “Twin Fun”.

To benefit from this offer, payment must be received by 12am midnight on 4 July (PST).

"Every writer gets to a point where they can't see the wood for the trees. What they need is someone with the conceptual tools to cut through the undergrowth and clear a path towards where they want to go. Karel Segers is my man with the chainsaw."

-Clive Hopkins,
Writer of the upcoming feature ROAD TRAIN and Oscar-nominated short HOLIDAY ROMANCE.

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"The guy with the girl’s name and strange accent thinks he knows story?" That was my first impression, but actually, Karel is the Aussie film industry’s best kept secret, as passionate about a script’s commercial viability as he is about narrative integrity."

-Phyllis Foundis Writer/Producer

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“Karel is my go-to guy for Development and/or Script Assessment. I have recommended his services to several colleagues, all of whom have been very satisfied with the results.”

- Michael Favelle, Int. Sales Agent

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“I am now sending my pitches to Hollywood and am delighted to have this opportunity to recommend Karel to anyone whose story structure needs a bit of TLC. Karel is definitely the doctor to consult.”

-Elizabeth Ban Writer / Journalist

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He’s honest and pragmatic but he knows the story is yours and he doesn’t try to rewrite it. Karel is a rare beast amongst story consultants - a film literate and long-standing aficionado of many film genres.”

-Kieran Galvin, Film Director / Screenwriter

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Karel Segers is the king of story structure and the service he provides is exceptional.

After an intensive three days in “The Cave” with Karel and following a rewrite, my project has now been optioned by a leading producer.

-Meg Shields, Screenwriter

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“As an actor and film maker the ‘lights have gone on!’ so to speak. I feel I can now assess any short or feature script in a totally new light and do so with great confidence thanks to your workshops and the methodology you teach.”

-Graham Gall Producer, Director, Actor

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“Karel Segers brilliantly conveys the best of what is currently understood about effective story telling for the cinema.”

-Ron Cobb, Concept Artist, Writer, Director

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"Reading back my initial, pre-consulted draft, I don't know where I would have been without your advice. Thank you for helping me become a better writer! I recommend anyone else out there trying to get their material seen to do the same."

-Wojciech Wawrzyniak Writer, Director

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“Karel Segers is Australia’s Robert McKee”

– Stephen J De Jager,

Creative Director,

Roadshow Entertainment

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"Karel helped pinpoint what was alive in the story but not expressed thoroughly and how to make the characters stronger, more surprising and more empathetic."

-Jean-Claude Van Rijckeghem, Writer, Producer

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"Karel backs his advice with examples from Schindler's List to Toy Story. He is a true film aficionado and a first class script analyst. He brought the best out of my script."

-Jack Brislee,Chairman, Australian Writers Guild, NSW Associates Committee